Sunday, August 7, 2011

My Poetry

Well, this is my newest poem.  This is about the guy that is my greatest enemy and my secret crush of the past year, but just admitted it to myself. 

The Love of my Hate

You’re my greatest foe. 
You’ve filled my world with woe,
But someone changed my eyes. 
Now I’m full of whys. 

I once had hate,
For all your traits;
But now your smile
Makes me pause for a while. 

For you I still have hate,
But at this rate
I may just come to love you,
 And let my true feelings through. 

You’re my greatest enemy,
But could you now be
A piece of my great,
Or just the love of my hate? 

1 comment:

  1. this poem has form, so I like it.
    This poem has feeling, so I like it.
    J, it's a great poem!

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